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Bathhouse Snack Pt 1 by Jora-Bora Bathhouse Snack Pt 1 by Jora-Bora
Commission for :iconagnitnurk:

This is kind of one of those commissions that I let sit unfinished too long, and it got "stale" to me. It happens, but despite that feeling, I'm pretty happy with how it came out. Honestly, I think the steam makes the picture--it would look a lot worse without it in my opinion. I also did a dumb idea with the throat, trying to do a semi-isometric view on it, and I feel I failed. Oh well. :shrug: I was just trying to avoid the norm.

But I'm rambling. Enjoy the picture. It might be the last one you see from me for a little while, since I'm going to be going on spring break, and switching to my new computer while I'm at it, and without an external hard drive, that may take awhile...
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:icongamewizard-2008:
gamewizard-2008 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
What an excellent snack it was!
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:iconkittyfuture:
Kittyfuture Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Have you ever heard of Dragonvoremors?
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student General Artist
I have not.
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:iconkittyfuture:
Kittyfuture Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Maybe you should check her out. she is really good at vores, Like you are.
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Mmm, there are many categories of vore, and the one she seems to specialize in is not my particular cup of tea.

I appreciate the suggestion though. ^_^
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:iconkittyfuture:
Kittyfuture Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Okay that's fine ^^
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:iconwolfering:
Wolfering Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
:)
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:iconghostcatgirl123:
GhostCatGirl123 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
Cool
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:iconjdoggad:
Jdoggad Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Filmographer
The Cannibals have come...Grim Card Entry you can join Death now.
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:icondeathmonster123:
deathmonster123 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Part 2?
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Been commissioned and paid for, it's a matter of when I have time to draw it.
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:iconrhgame:
RHgame Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice :) me nexr, me next yay :)
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:iconzelemongurl:
ZeLemonGurl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
XD
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:iconvlove300:
VLove300 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
LOVE  IT!
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:iconjoaovictorssampaio:
joaovictorssampaio Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
nah, the troat is nice :3 i like it very much, that a lucky guy, i would love to be him XD  
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:iconkokeman:
kokeman Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
This one is soooo great congrats I really love it
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
Aheh, thanks.
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:iconkokeman:
kokeman Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
No prob, just saying the truth, you're starting to become one of my favorite artists ^_^
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:iconwolfering:
Wolfering Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
:3
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:iconuberking422:
uberking422 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
The throat shot looks fine to me. Though if you'll pardon criticism from some who knows next to nothing about drawing, her hair is at an odd angle that, combined with the shading, at first glance makes it look like she has an overly angular jawline, making her face appear too thin.
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student General Artist
I can see where you're coming from. Haruhi's design is a bit weird and the way I chose to draw her hair didn't help. Without the visibility of her ears, it's hard to determine the width of her face.
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:iconandruril93:
Andruril93 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lookin' great!
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:iconyoshidude4960:
Yoshidude4960 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Always glad to see Haruhi vore
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:iconintagru:
Intagru Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
wonderfull as usual not much else to say :)
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:iconarchsteel:
Archsteel Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Yep... Well judging from your previous works we all now how this ends.
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Andras63 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Four!  Four first pages! Ah ah ah ah! :iconthecountplz:
Everything's great as always.  My only problem is that Haruhi looks a bit masculine in the bottom panel.  I'm not sure whether it's her hair being shorter or because something else, but she looks less feminine than normal.
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
The jaw. Pretty sure it's the jaw, and I'm only now seeing it. >.> It's rather long, and a bit pointed, so that might be where that is coming from.
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:iconprof-nekko:
Prof-Nekko Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
jeez the punishment for peeping gets worse every time
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:iconxiao-renzhe:
xiao-renzhe Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Stale to you happens to be an instant favorite to me. I love her understandably strained expression whilst gulping down a rather sizable victim. It's fun and inspiring touch of realism. Also, the throat-bisect-angle is wonderfully creative. It's actually what first caught my eye. It's gotta be hard to be creative when so many artists have accomplished internal perspectives in so many ways, but I'd say you accomplished a lot with this one. Out with a bang. Enjoy spring break! Your watchers will miss you here!
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Not stale in comcept, I just let it sit too long, unfinished, like a bag of pretzels
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:iconxiao-renzhe:
xiao-renzhe Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I hear ya. I wouldn't wish stale pretzels upon anybody. Also, forgot to mention, I like the consistency in his position going  from being lowered in to being squeezed down her throat. Kudos. :)
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joeburp22181 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Nah, your a good artist, we are always our own worst critic.  I wish you well in school and hope you have fun on spring break, would look forward to seeing and hearing from you again.  Best Wishes

Jon!
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:iconmawleficent:
Mawleficent Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Writer
I still think the Touhou Komeiji sister commission is your best vore picture to date.
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:iconjust-a-cupcake:
Just-a-cupcake Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist
I think the throat view is great it really stands out compared to other similar sequences.
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Well, I suppose that's what I was going for ^^;
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:iconxavos23:
xavos23 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Artist
Just so I don't come off as ignorant, is that Haruhi Suzumiya or someone else with yellow ribbons?
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Nope, it's Haruhi. XD
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:iconxavos23:
xavos23 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Artist
DO'H! Well, I'd say I'm off to drink but got to wait one more year.
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:iconjora-bora:
Jora-Bora Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Pfft.

Six months here, but I might have a few bevs over spring break with the family.
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